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He strongly missed
the birds' exposes.


Laughton McCcry (july2011)
52 Week Six Word Story Challenge - [Week 29: Write a six word story of a sense (from the five senses) without mentioning the sense or the words related to it. ]



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I would call it differently than 'exposes'... it doesn't feel quite right there, but that is just me.

I like how poignant this piece is and how the title is somewhat fitting of both the main subject matter and the bird itself.

I feel as if there should be an apostrophe in 'birds', but.. yeah. o.O