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O-Tiz page 5 by LaughtonMcCry O-Tiz page 5 by LaughtonMcCry
after a long pause, finally, page 5.

okay, i know its another paper, and another colouring technique. tell me which you like more. iam not to sure about this. but i want to have them all in the same style of course :]

see the others too ^^

page1: fav.me/d3ifwul
page2:
page3: fav.me/d3ifx9l
page4: fav.me/d3j2koe (coloured version:fav.me/d3k6znx)
page5: fav.me/d4hc51q
page6: fav.me/d5aypq6
page7-8: fav.me/d5m3jci
page9:fav.me/d6jwkfd


These pages are not so much storys,
but more like visual lyrics. One on every page.
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:iconcheshire1337:
i actually made sure before the crit to make sure this wasnt a early Moebius comic i didnt know of.

im not sure just how sequential it is, but thats not really the point i think, it looks great, i really like the frame outlines, the only thing i can think of that might be able to improve is the hatching, hatches and cross hatches dont have to be square, they look better if they go with the shape of the object there shading. if you look at moebiuses arzach or really any comic youll see he almost never makes straight lines(except horizons at times)
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:iconalchemichael77:
alchemichael77 Nov 9, 2012  Professional
love this style.
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:iconlaughtonmccry:
LaughtonMcCry Nov 10, 2012  Student General Artist
ow, thank you ^^
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:iconalchemichael77:
alchemichael77 Nov 10, 2012  Professional
np.
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:iconthanathan:
Hat sein Name eigentlich eine Bedeutung?
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:iconlaughtonmccry:
LaughtonMcCry Jul 2, 2012  Student General Artist
oh, it is!
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:iconthanathan:
Das macht irgendwie Sinn.
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:iconlittlewing09:
That's a very cool style, I think you should do more.
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:iconlaughtonmccry:
LaughtonMcCry Feb 17, 2012  Student General Artist
by the gods, i think that too^^
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:iconlittlewing09:
Talos guide you landstrider!!
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:iconthe-mirrorball-man:
The-Mirrorball-Man Jan 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh this looks fantastic. It reminds me of some of Philippe Druillet's early comics.
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