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O-Tiz page 5 by LaughtonMcCry O-Tiz page 5 by LaughtonMcCry
after a long pause, finally, page 5.

okay, i know its another paper, and another colouring technique. tell me which you like more. iam not to sure about this. but i want to have them all in the same style of course :]

see the others too ^^

page1: fav.me/d3ifwul
page2:
page3: fav.me/d3ifx9l
page4: fav.me/d3j2koe (coloured version:fav.me/d3k6znx)
page5: fav.me/d4hc51q
page6: fav.me/d5aypq6
page7-8: fav.me/d5m3jci
page9:fav.me/d6jwkfd


These pages are not so much storys,
but more like visual lyrics. One on every page.
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:iconcheshire1337:
i actually made sure before the crit to make sure this wasnt a early Moebius comic i didnt know of.

im not sure just how sequential it is, but thats not really the point i think, it looks great, i really like the frame outlines, the only thing i can think of that might be able to improve is the hatching, hatches and cross hatches dont have to be square, they look better if they go with the shape of the object there shading. if you look at moebiuses arzach or really any comic youll see he almost never makes straight lines(except horizons at times)
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:iconalchemichael77:
alchemichael77 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Professional
love this style.
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:iconlaughtonmccry:
LaughtonMcCry Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student General Artist
ow, thank you ^^
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:iconalchemichael77:
alchemichael77 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Professional
np.
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:iconthanathan:
Thanathan Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
Hat sein Name eigentlich eine Bedeutung?
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:iconlaughtonmccry:
LaughtonMcCry Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Student General Artist
oh, it is!
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:iconthanathan:
Thanathan Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
Das macht irgendwie Sinn.
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:iconlittlewing09:
littlewing09 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
That's a very cool style, I think you should do more.
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:iconlaughtonmccry:
LaughtonMcCry Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Student General Artist
by the gods, i think that too^^
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:iconlittlewing09:
littlewing09 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012
Talos guide you landstrider!!
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:iconthe-mirrorball-man:
The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh this looks fantastic. It reminds me of some of Philippe Druillet's early comics.
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:iconlaughtonmccry:
LaughtonMcCry Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Student General Artist
wow, now thats quite a complient ^^ thank youuuuu 8D
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:iconutria:
utria Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Sehr gut. Ich mag die Farben.
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:iconlaughtonmccry:
LaughtonMcCry Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Student General Artist
danke sehr. das hört man gern ^^

ich mag übrigens deine Bilder. die sind wirklich Wunderbar!
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:iconutria:
utria Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Vielen Danke.
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:icondeimos-remus:
Deimos-Remus Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Great job, to reiterate what others have said, this is very Moebius!
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:iconlaughtonmccry:
LaughtonMcCry Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Student General Artist
yeah... hes my favourite ^^
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:icondeimos-remus:
Deimos-Remus Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Same here, one of my favorites for sure!
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:iconjesncin:
JesnCin Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Wow, you've made a very creative world all ready! I like the look of the mountain in the back and the upside down mountain :O
I like this style very much, the colors look very nice :)
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:iconlaughtonmccry:
LaughtonMcCry Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Student General Artist
^^ thank you. good that you like the colouring, i wastn to sure which version is the better one.
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:iconjesncin:
JesnCin Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome, and no problem X)
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:icondeborah-valentine:
Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
reminds me of Moebus I like this style very much
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:iconlaughtonmccry:
LaughtonMcCry Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Student General Artist
yes, Moebius if phantastic. ^^

i love your gallery btw ^^
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:icondeborah-valentine:
Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank You so much :heart:
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:iconfarawayforest:
farawayforest Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
Is he falling deeper and deeper into layers of a world?
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:iconlaughtonmccry:
LaughtonMcCry Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student General Artist
well... its some "gap" or mirror slit" or such a thing. a thin border between, yes layers is a very good word ^^, of the world. And O Tiz is traveling between these layers
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:iconfarawayforest:
farawayforest Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
Such a great concept. Like he's falling. The story seems to have an inevitable forward pulling feel to it, like gravity or something is moving it on.
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:iconsmokx:
Smokx Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student Photographer
Ooooo, this is so beautiful, almost like one of those old posters :D
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:iconlaughtonmccry:
LaughtonMcCry Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student General Artist
yes, i like the feeling of those things touched by time ^^
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:iconsmokx:
Smokx Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student Photographer
yeah, they are quite nice :)
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