okay, i know its another paper, and another colouring technique. tell me which you like more. iam not to sure about this. but i want to have them all in the same style of course :]
i actually made sure before the crit to make sure this wasnt a early Moebius comic i didnt know of.
im not sure just how sequential it is, but thats not really the point i think, it looks great, i really like the frame outlines, the only thing i can think of that might be able to improve is the hatching, hatches and cross hatches dont have to be square, they look better if they go with the shape of the object there shading. if you look at moebiuses arzach or really any comic youll see he almost never makes straight lines(except horizons at times)
im not sure just how sequential it is, but thats not really the point i think, it looks great, i really like the frame outlines, the only thing i can think of that might be able to improve is the hatching, hatches and cross hatches dont have to be square, they look better if they go with the shape of the object there shading. if you look at moebiuses arzach or really any comic youll see he almost never makes straight lines(except horizons at times)
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